Now, I say this once: My work will all be posted on this thread so once one is finished, I will likely have to continue to ask on my next it may take some time to regain my ideas and also think up new ones since my computer was deleted, destroying all and my cousin's RP work. And my depression is something stupid in real life and really I don't feel comfortable speaking about it - it's namely about sociality in you typical highshcool and lack of friendship. I was once known to be one of the best, and to type the longest, now finds myself feeling stupid around when I began to feel depressed. I am only 16, and had had this as a mishap since the first couple of months I started to "Role Play" descriptively, not like those easy-posting Gaia users, on a web site. Reason vary to either my sensetence structuring, my bad way of revising and reading comprehension (or rereading it which makes me believe I have freakin Dyslexia, and I even add a lot of useless sentences and mostly resaid sentences but in different formations and way of saying it, and i really don'y even notice how people can see it like that and I can't), or too long sentences, or may other clauses (I don't even know what clause means, and I've read its description many times and still don't understand). People say that my sentenses sound awkward, and give that familiar ring to it so they can understand it, but only at a slight. Seriously, my work is depending on a damn program (StyleWriter or WhiteSmoke, which ever's better - somehow I prefer more of StyleWriter, sadly it costs more -.- ) It seems to be the more I grow older, the more I become the worse writer you'll ever meet (did I mention if I speak, they come out not how I wished for and misunderstanding most of the time?). I am sufferring a terrible view of writing, meaning I can think stuff up, probably very out of imagination, it's that my writing and the depression lowers my once good senses.
(Don't even know if that made any sense -.- ) I probably may be one of many to ask about character descriptions and bio corrections, so what I ask for may or may not come at you newly.